Words

I watchd the rain drops fall from the misty sky,

Felt the cold hue on my skin.

I heard her voice singing a sad lullyby,

My tears were lost in the mist and the rain

 

One by one they poured down my cheek,

In silence the tears poured,

like acid rain on my skin.

 

My lips were parted yet i could not speak

Words lost forever...in a single moment.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

This speaks of a deep sorrow, only heard in the soul of the mother rain. The rain pours while in solitude's grace, the tears flow, hidden by the mother. The thoughts and emotions, the words... vanishing into the the sand, upon a lonely walk.

Your words carry a powerful moment with them. I could feel the piece vibrating at the core of who I am. Great Ink!

Aaron

[Seshat Nidaba]

You create a lot of space inbetween the concepts and fragments that make this a while, I like how you write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Sometime words will do nothing for us. Silence is a better place to find. I like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm rain as a metaphor is always attracting to Me ...it embodies so many senses stimulation I believe that's why...short write ...speaks volumes.

[J Kiplinger Young]

great choice of words to convey emotion

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The greatest emotions; the grandest and most painful, are always to big for words. Words shrink things down in our minds that were big as the sky in our hearts. You capture that feeling well here.