Release of Hope

Inspired from the hit movie Shawsake Redemption

Life is like building blocks 

We tend to our way to the top 

And find our goals in tact 

Then one incident tears it down 

Our dreams are crushed 

Our hopes are smashed 

There's nothing left 

Nothing but guilt 

Guilt is a prison 

It can lock you inside its cell 

Beat you with a stick 

And shot you down with a sniper rifle

You're finished with a beard in solitary confinement 

But there's hope 

It's in a pipline full of crap

If you can escape guilt,

get a rock

Break the solid boundaries of fear 

Get in the pipline and crawl through the crap

Like there's no tommorow 

Then out of the outside is light 

Fear can hold you like a prisoner

Hope can set you free 

So there are two choices 

Get busy living of get busy dying 

Author's Note

Consider this to be my redeming factor the of last two poems I wrote. This one actullay came from my heart when I typed this one from the notebook I had written one.

So tell what do think about? What did you think of the inspiration? Was it good?

Reviews

[Deepika]

Lovely work! It's as inspiring as the movie shawshank redemption. Keep writing(y)
Looks like a minor fix in the last line : Get busy living 'or' get busy dying

[Double T]

Thanks I really owe one. :)

[Jamestown]

My friend, this is so well written! The message is full of power and truth,
you really just tell it how it is, not pulling punches! Love it:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!