The world of war.

Its about war, everything has its good and bad sides...so does war ;)

 

'Tis true what they sadly say,
Though they fight come what may,
The defeated live in pain
or die for a cause in vain.

But only warfare leads to peace,
clean of all stains on justice,
for the peace before often wayward,
invokes war pushing people upward.

see the side of a coin u don't bother ,
and don’t keep gazing at the other.
for the goodness of war hidden in,
makes its boasted effects win.

Will you, when your destiny calls,
the time when your kingdom falls,
let your beloved brethren die? 
and hence their children cry??

Author's Note

Well, this is a bit of controversy, this is one of my first attempts in poetry, I'm just 15, so even i know its not great. But just help me, please let me know where i can improve, your suggestions and of course how the poem is ;)

Reviews

[Solar]

“War is the mother of everything.”
– Heraclitus, Greek philosopher (535-475BC)

''But only warfare leads to peace,
clean of all stains on justice,
for the peace before often wayward,
invokes war pushing people upward''

A poem that courageously points out the facts.

[Arjun Singh]

Surely amazingh fr 15...
Keep writing like this nd i assure top grade poetry dude...
:)

[Dayran]

It is a praise of heroism in a growing mind that may be encountering much in the way of challenges. This is normal in a growing boy. What will be curious is, how you guide yourself through the rest of your young years.