I'm Not Finished

Too many roads I still haven't taken.

So many tears I still haven't wept.

Too many bonds I still haven't broken.

So many dreams I still haven't dreamt.

Author's Note

I'm not yet finished with living. There's still too much I haven't experienced. :)
All comments welcome.

Reviews

[RosylnPeaches]

Choices , Pain, Promises and dreams. The bigger things in life yet small. I love the poem . Makes you think . Makes you want to change.

[Marie Anzalone]

"For I have promises to keep
and miles to go before I sleep"
-Frost

this is what came to mind immediately... not a bad thing at all.

[Through the Gateway]

Absolutely beautiful in its brevity! A simple statement...I'm not finished. Wonderfully written, Vesa!

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a determined voice singing through this piece. It filled me with a sense of life's enduring grace to move on in the face of any and all obstacles. Thank you! I needed that!

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Congratulations on your First place award! The nice thing about youth is that you get to do it over till you get it right!!

Beatrice Boyle (Grandma Bea)

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Simple; it says what it means and means what it says. Almost anyone could relate to this. Most people, I'd venture to say, don't feel quite done with life. Very great piece. Makes me think. Makes me wanna skydive or something. ;)
KH

[Jim Clarke]

Yopu have captured some of the key feelings a person has as they near death.