Love is a simple Thought

True love exist when you let it be.

Every heart feels

Love can’t be denied

Flames courage that frightens as it strengthens

Enfeebled souls

To make a jump

High as the bird that soar the skies

 

Candled stars glittering nights of dreams

Sprits wings free

In an open breeze of a summer day

Joys bask the sun

Melting ice lollies

Once sweet as your kiss

 

Gelid emotions frozen to love

Pain is the reason

Broken pieces are left on the ground

Throbbing steps of every walk tries to forget

 

But love is love that is true

Pure without blemish of imperfect love birds winged broken

Blind to see

Love is love emotions poignant and free.

 

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

Ayanda - thank you for sharing this piece. It is quite a complex piece to decipher, yet you still feel the pain of broken love. You could have used "Gelid" alone to signify the 'emotions to love' and that would be fine. The last line should be tighter to express 'pure love.' Keep going! This is a fantastic start!

[Ayanda Mteto]

Thank for the reveiw and recomandations, very much appreciated.

[TTBoy28]

It's my pleasure! And remember, they are only recommendations! You're going to be great!