"WAKE UP"

this is the hardest fact. so need we not wake up as "one world"?

A beautiful poem,

a meaningful writing,
a tragic love story
a wonderful book,
a lovely song

And sweet and soft music,

all the vast technology
and its business based usage,

still can't meet the hunger 
of helpless poor child,

still can't provide peaceful,

secure and prosperous life,

to the innocent passengers of life,

in those parts of this world,

declared as third world...!

and it makes a sense 
having all these wonderful qualities ,
how helpless we all are...... 
and thus humanity feels shameful

being surrounded by 
narrow boundaries and laws,
that for the better living of self
we have forgot 
what life actually means.....................……..?

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write. We are spiraling towards the way God made us, slowly but surely we will become. Lives are not lost, they return as we make progress to change a world once apathetic and cruel. More people are aware and care about what happens in this world.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

agreed dear Brandon..thanks for inspiring words.

[Cassie Fraga]

TRUTH!!!! yes, yes, I appreciate this piece!!! thank you for sharing!!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[rosemary keogh]

Very good and so true. I realy enjoyed this. Inspiring. :)

[Cathy Wattam]

So true. We do have all this technology and yet the world is full of starving, homeless children and adults. I do agree with Rylan though that the last line should read "what life actually means". Otherwise, very nicely written.

[s.r.knight]

I think you should rearrange the last line to say "what life actually means", it makes more sense. Other than that this was a lovely piece. Very well written!

[Rae Emeral]

Very interesting. I liked reading it. Nice poem.
~Rae

[Southern Cross]

Beautifully written for such a sad state of affairs. Shame that I find the more "advanced" we become the more indifferent we appear. Technology has become our "walls" and human nature is headed for distinction..We must each do our part to remedy this ..It will be our only salvation

[Mockingbird]

people are so absorbed in technology and themselves to be bothered to look around and find unfortunate people who are starving. these are selfish people. there are food drives everywhere where they can donate a can of soup but they're too oblivious because they're too busy texting.

[MOON]

Exactly , all the progress in the world and we cant solve basic problems. There is enough bounty in the world to keep us all well fed but greed eclipses all that.

[Marie]

So true. Here we are, surrounded by vast beauty and intricate technology, while people die for want of food and shelter which our resources should make possible to all.

[xSamilynnx]

really good n sadly its all totally true...... very well written good job :)