Beautiful Mess

Just a simple poem about life. Nothing too deep, nothing to special, I just want to thank you, with all of my pleasure.

Beautiful Mess.

Where should I go? What should I do?
Nowhere to hide, no path to pursue.
Life is a book, with chapters so bright,
Reading is fun, but I lose my sight.

I saw someone, shining like gold,
I thought he was strong, fearless and bold.
But then I realized, I was wrong,
He was just there to mourn all along.

I feared to see through all the lies,
Yet somehow, it ended up in a sweet surprise.

I am shocked by how people think they can copy others' answers,
Not realizing that life has given them different question papers.

I don’t know what I'm trying to be,
Except that it's a strange melody.
I don't know if this is a bless,
I just know that life is a beautiful mess.

Reviews

[Neville]

I do like a beautiful mess .. its probably when and where I feel my most comfortable .. tis indeed loverly 😎

[Ayesha Faiz]

Ahh yesss!! A beautiful mess has its own charm 🌸✨ it’s like the perfect chaos where everything just feels real and alive… honestly, nothing better than that vibe.
;) Thank you so much for your review.

[Neville]

a real pleasure .. 😎👍

[Soren]

An existential poem of being and meaning. It speaks to the core of the meaning of life and who we are. Nicely set to rhyme it takes the reader along a path that others have blazed and that we all must walk. Lovely

[Ayesha Faiz]

Your review means alot. I sincerely appreciate it.

[Soren]

You are most welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Sooner or later we must be ourselves...copying others might help us pass the course of life, but we will always feel uneasy until we approach the test of existence with our own answers.
Nicely done, Ayesha.
j.

[Ayesha Faiz]

You never fail to surprise me with your thoughtful words. And yes... you're so right, true peace only comes when we live as our real selves. Thank you for always sharing such deep reflections.

[Kady R.]

Hiii Ayeshaaa,

There is so much back and forth with transitions in life. And sometimes you just fall into a position that may not be something that person desires.

I love how you wrote "I am shocked by how people think they can copy others answers, not realizing that life has given them different question papers." It is sooo true!!! And very observant of you to see how society cane be and the cultures that come from them.

Another brilliant poem Ayeshaaa!!! 🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰

[Ayesha Faiz]

You're full of positive energy, you know that? And thats what I absolutely admire about you. Once again dear friend, thanks for your time and support!

[Kady R.]

You're a sweety Ayesha!! Anytime dear friend!!🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰

[Buddhistboy73]

A nice write on the beautiful mess that is life...:)

I liked the simplicity but also depth of this poem.....

I don't now if this is a bless
I just know that life is a beautiful mess

Thanks for sharing...

BB73

[Ayesha Faiz]

It's always nice to hear kind words like those from others.
I really thank you for stopping by to review my poem.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Hello Ayesha, having just discovered your work after a kind review you left me, I note in your profile that you are only 16 years of age. I am decades older than you. For most of us, life seems to be a beautiful mess in our teens and twenties. I now live amongst people in their 60’s, 70’s and 80’s, and I find the few people whose lives are still a beautiful mess are the ones truly worth knowing. So many people seem to just fossilize along life’s path. Never do that. Let yourself stay a beautiful mess!

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me! I’ll try my best to stay a beautiful mess 😊read moreThank you so much! That really means a lot to me! I’ll try my best to stay a beautiful mess 😊
I really value your time and perspective.

[A.H.]

Life is sometimes a mess, we don't know where we are heading and how we are going to hold up. you bring this indirection and uncertainty here clearly. I like the way poem flows and it talks to the reader. Thanks for this piece, Ayesha!

[Ayesha Faiz]

Your words are much appreciated! Thanks alot for stopping by to review my poem...

[Neha agrawal]

"Life has given them different question papers” that line floored me. This is such a graceful reminder that it’s okay not to have it all figured out. Chaotic, honest.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thank you so much for giving my poem a read!

[Gregoria Ahmed]

This felt like truth in soft focus, simple but filled with clarity. That line about “different question papers” stayed with me... such a quietly powerful way to describe how uniquely each of us journeys through life. You’ve captured confusion, discovery, and grace all at once. Thank you for sharing this gentle window into your thoughts.

[Ayesha Faiz]

I really appreciate your kind words. Mean a lot to me. Thanks alot!

[Gregoria Ahmed]

You're most welcome, Ayesha. Your poem carried a tender truth, I'm glad I got to reflect some of that back to you. Keep writing what's real. There's power in the quiet.

[Ayesha Faiz]

I will. Thanks alot for your support! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Ayesha.
(I don’t know what I'm trying to be,
Except that it's a strange melody.
I don't know if this is a bless,
I just know that life is a beautiful mess.)
Life is very messy sometime. We must escape the city, we must escape the noise. Seek peace. I enjoyed the complete poem. You made the reader think.
Coyote

[Ayesha Faiz]

Your words matter alot to me. It makes the writer happy when someone appreciates their writings. Once again, thanks alot Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ayesha.