The mirror doesn't lie

I wrote this poem with inspiration from a creative friend. Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

"The Mirror Doesn’t Lie"

She never spoke - at least, not loud,
Her silence wrapped her like a shroud.
The world passed by with blinded eyes,
Too deaf to hear her inward cries.

They saw a face both calm and still,
A woman bent to others’ will.
But in the mirror, truth would gleam -
A whisper woven through the seam.

The mirror knew what none could guess,
Her quietness held no helplessness.
In glances cast, her soul would tell
Of dreams that rose where silence fell.

No scream, no storm, no shouted plea--"
Yet strength ran deeper than the sea.
Her hush was not from fear or lack,
But an armour none could see or crack.

And in the end, the mirror spoke -
The silence split, the silence broke.
"You were not voiceless - just unseen.
Power wears silence, just like a queen."

Reviews

[elsa]

Truly a powerful poem. Keep up the work!

[Michael Sun Bear]

Ayesha, who is this about? A real person or a fictional character? Your poem made me think of mothers for some reason. As I have said elsewhere, your writing, particularly for someone your age, is excellent. Keep at it!

[emmajoygreen]

There are two ways to survive: silently thoughtful, pacing self's outer and more important, inner feelings and what.to.do bewilderment. Or.. stamping around, shouting plus yelling self into utter confusion. Pause, inhale and exale slowly, let body limp into silence. Your words are advice from the best, a true call for taking time to mull things over, to hold back yet consider calmly as can and.. hopefully return to self with at least a gentle smile. You write with great thought and care: thank you so much for sharing.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm really glad the message spoke to you. It's true, sometimes we just need to slow down, breathe, and quietly find our way back to ourselves. Your response means a lot, and I deeply appreciate you taking the time to share it.

[emmajoygreen]

It's not easy to find one's own remedy, emotioins are all over the place. But, things do have a way of calming, best Focus on lighter and brighter things about you, Ayesha. (What a lovely name.) what a lovely . Perhaps.. maybe?

[Ayesha Faiz]

You're too kind... Your comment made me really, really happy. I can't thank you enough in words, but for now, that's all I can do.
THANKS ALOT !

[emmajoygreen]

My review was how your words made me feel.. With absolute respect: your age and ability holds incredible intelligence and beauty. Truly.

[Ayesha Faiz]

I'm beyond thankful to you for thinking about me in a positive way. Endless gratitude.

[emmajoygreen]

No need to say more - you deserve every word I left here for you. Enjoy each and every one of your tomorrows, Ayesha Faiz

Have no idea why my review was so messy, forgive, please, Ayesha.

[Neville]

How cool and well formed in its entirety .. Be very proud .. I know I would be .. Neville

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thank you soo much and I wish I could be proud of myself, but not now. I have a long way to go but I'm still trying.
I really, truly appreciate your feedback. Thanks again!

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Superb writing.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thanks alot for your review! Appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

An empowering poem with a powerful, truthful message wrapped in grace and understanding of the human power and will when deployed.
Bravo!

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thanks alot for stopping by to review my poem!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome

[Pallavi]

Wow! Too good.
It shows deep thought and the struggle.

Often people tend to think silence is weakness.
But it is the stronger than a thousand storms.

[Ayesha Faiz]

You understood the meaning of this poem and explained it in a few words. Bravo!
Thanks for stopping by.

[carl]

Silence often appears to others as weakness but in reality can be a sign of inner strength - the loud are often just boisterous to present a facade of false courage - the mirror reflects truth of self confidence - nice piece of work - rhyme scheme very well done - carl

[Ayesha Faiz]

It's always nice to hear from you Carl. Thank you very much!

[Lydia Shutter]

This one is so empowering for women! The rhyming is flawless as is the rhythm. Indeed, those who quietly observe the world have the power. Some people need to have an impenetrable shield around them. Perhaps they have been hurt in the past or have a fear of being hurt. Often those people are underestimated. Truly a wonderful poem here. Lydi**

[Ayesha Faiz]

I'm thankful for your time and thoughtful review. Much appreciated!

[Pete]

strongly written. so very true, 'the mirror doesn't lie' and neither do your words. better to be heard than seen. nice work, good imagery and emotion. much enjoyed.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Happiness is when others enjoy your work and your comment made me happy. So glad you enjoyed it!