Lanterns In The Abyss

Lanterns in the Abyss

I asked the silence why we breathe,
and it replied with echoes of stones,
reminding me that even mountains crumble,
yet still are called eternal.

The river knows it will never touch
the same drop twice,
but it runs anyway--
its purpose not to keep,
but to lose, beautifully.

We are no different.
Our hearts are brief lanterns
burning against the endless dark,
and the flame is not less holy
for knowing it will die.

Perhaps meaning is not a crown
to wear at the end,
but the quiet decision to walk,
to stumble,
to stand again--
and to love as though
the night will never close.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

"our hearts are brief lanterns burning against the endless dark".... I believe we should live our lives to the fullest and not think about death...as the path to death comes slowly; find meaning in your life and the lantern will not burn out until you desire....life is not eternal...but the spirit lives on eternally
Lovely
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

What a great second stanza.
And your definition of "meaning" is so spot on...the road to finding meaning is much more important than what we find out in the end.
You are sixteen and write like this already? My goodness you are going to be a superstar poet.
j.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Hahaha, there’s nothing special about me, my friend. I just have a deep interest in philosophy and life, thanks to my brother and his deep conversations with me. I appreciate you reviewing my poem. It added another stanza in my heart.
:)

[Arundass TP]

Excellent writing. Poem moves through mystery of nature. Great one

[Ayesha Faiz]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I very much appreciate that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A really fantastic poem. I believe it is best to be open hearted no matter how many times it gets broken. For to not you will miss out on some spectacular things, and not really living

[Ayesha Faiz]

I really appreciate your review. It encourages me deeply.
Much appreciated.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous writing. Powerful and deep.

[Ayesha Faiz]

I truly appreciate your thoughtful words.
Means alot.

[DIVYA]

To keep shining in the face of our mortality is the most beautiful thing about us. Beautifully expressed, Ayesha. Your message is so lasting.

[Ayesha Faiz]

Your review means alot to me.
Millions of thanks for stopping by and reviewing my poem.
read moreYour review means alot to me.
Millions of thanks for stopping by and reviewing my poem.
:)

[DIVYA]

You're most welcome, Ayesha. Great poetry. Keep writing.

[Ayesha Faiz]

:) Thanks.