The Days I've Lost

I regret these days I lost,

One big past, Futurs most,

The rise of death, Begining left,

Brought upon me, The despise and depth,

You failed to support my body,

you've let me fall and how?

Theres no hope, so please dont try,

You cant save me now.

Reviews

[Succubi]

i feel the same kind of regret in so many ways to
nice poem =)
i can definatly relate

[Marie]

I've felt regret like that. Thanks for sharing.

[Marie]

This is really nice.

[Riverdance]

Nothing's never too late as long as you're alive.
Remember that.

THough I'm sorry you're regretting something.
But, like Emerson always says, the past is behind you so you must just keep facing forward.
Or something like that anyhow.

God bless!
~RD

[NyPoet]

deep, the only thing is, like i say, u regret nothing u do, so maybe take that out of there. break up poem im guessing? says a lot about the person who it is about, she sounds disappointing, upsetting, but it sounds like u love her...never loose faith