Old Sorrow And Missery

My life feels like its ending. Its just floating away, along with my dignity and my soul which is in the wind, which is being crushed in dispite. As I sit in the cold wet snow, As I ponder Amongst the ritc, How is my life ending, dying in a ditch. I wish this could all change as I cryed Like a b***h.

Reviews

[Succubi]

nice acrostic poem =)
i was able to capture your angst and anguish in this poem very well
along with the melancholy and depression

[Riverdance]

I have to echo the words of a few other reviewers: Nice Acrostic!

=)

~RD

[Marie]

Nice acrostic.

[Leah Simone]

nice acrostic

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A well thought out piece. best wishes, Bethlynne.

[Rooney]

acrostic usually means bullshit.
But the message converyed here makes it quite...
clever.
well done.

[Megan]

I love the way you can get the message across in very few words. Very distinct, I hope that makes sense to you the way I want it. to Well done!