A whole new light

Love poems, so refreshing

Fresh cut grass, so green and lush

Towering trees and underbrush

Cloudless skies, so blue and clear

Birds and crickets for all to hear

A flowered meadow beautiful and bright

Helps seeing you in a whole new light

I whisper something soft to you

You whisper back, "I love you too"

Author's Note

The last two lines shocked me, it was only a descriptive poem, but then they fit so well....viola! Does anyone have an idea for a title, because I do not

Reviews

[Lexi Nicole]

Lovely. Such beautiful imagery and the last two lines just tie it all together so well. Great work!

-Howl

[Melissa Kesead]

Short but absolutely beautiful!

[Gandré]

this was very sweet and perfect ending. thank for entering my contest.