Storm of love

Like the deafening beat of rain

My heart beats to the point of pain

Like the strong winds that blow

MY love for you will always show

Like the lightening, quick and few

My gestures of love are small, yet true

Like the storm, constant, determined, and bright

I'll hold on to you with all of my might

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, a love that is worth holding onto.....never let go of such as this!!
Nice write with a good flow!

[bluessadmood]

Yes thats the kind of love poets and writers used to sing of all time..kind of love that will shake my mind,just reading about it
Like deafening beat of rain,my heart beats all to pain
Like strong wind that blows taking everything in its way
my love will always show and so strong,like lightning quick and few
My storms constant determined,you will always be mine
I will always hold on so strong to you
lovely write..