Love Is Blind

Love is brightest...in the dark.

Love is blind,

For it can't see,

If love is blind,

Can't you see me?

Love is blind,

And yet I still...

 ...Feel and hear,

My love for you.

If love is blind,

Can I still cry?

For I am weeping,

Though it quiets with time.

If love is blind,

I can't see you,

And you cannot see me.

But that's okay,

Because I know,

I love you,

And I know you love me too.

Author's Note

I don't really know what I was thinking with this. The words literally fell out of my head and onto the screen. Maybe it's a good thing, xD

Reviews

[Cosmic Dreamer]

Wow. That is powerful. I love the whole idea, and yes, love probably is blind.
It's also probably a good sign if the words fall onto the page. Beautiful.

[Angel Bluestocking]

the words flow wonderfully. i love this poem!

[Tasha]

This was a wonderful and raw portrayal of emotions. Great write, I loved the flow.
♥ Ta'shandra

[C.N.Moore]

A great raw portrayal of a raw powerful emotion - I almost dare to say a revised version of this would take away from the power behind it.. the rawness does all the justice the piece deserves great write..

[Marie Harrison]

Good job I loved the messge and flow of your poem.

[Adam M. Snow]

Wow! Amazing yet true this is. Brilliantly written. Good job.