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Life among the wolves,

Seems like a life lived among the thorns, 
Day In day out, rinse repeat, it's all the same. 
In cycles we are born; and in them we shall die,

Dust to dust, never sounded this good,

Never sounded this promising.

You said "You can't drown,

If your lungs are already full of lies, 
And you can't Fall, if you're already breathing at the bottom." 
But these days, and those,

I swear that my darkest shadows now flee from my presence,
And every place of solace,

is now a reminder of your broken promises, 
A memoir of your thorny claws that stuck

And burrowed its way into me.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

i am so enjoying reading your lovely, well penned poetry Azriel. you create such wonderful atmospheres that tug at the heartstrings and are often very spiritual.I have to put some of your poems in my library for further reading and i hink you have a wonderful talent for expressing yourself through poetry.

[Azriel]

wow that means quite a lot to me, thank you.

[Stella Armour]

you are very welcome..

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~ wow... this is very powerful... that second stanza is particularly heartbreaking and moving... ~ though the details of my story might be different, i've been through these excruciating emotions... ~ i think you brought out the characteristics of betrayal really well...

[Azriel]

thank you for your review and your words, really does mean a lot to me.

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~ you're very welcome... ~ i relate to your words very intensely...