Abstract or Concrete

Abstract or Concrete

Beyond the scope of recognition

From a visionaries

Perspective is as abstract and compelling

As fulfilling an obligation

For the purpose of building a statue out of mortar

Vivid in detailed imagery

That will harden into a concrete sculpture

With an illuminating background of barren flames

As breathtaking as the wind giving life

To a significant blaze

For a unknown immortal figure

Is as abstract as its sculptured presence

Who's essence will be forever concrete

Beyond an inherent disbelief

Regarding a unforeseen image

That was worthy enough to be depicted

In the hall of fame for honorable apparitions

Reviews

[spiritwind]

breathe my imagination to life!
"With an illuminating background of barren flames
As breathtaking as the wind giving life
To a significant blaze "
love your quiver of words--an outstanding vocabulary for an outstanding poem

[kublakhan27]

The unique and intriguing analogies really bring this piece to life...well done :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes abstract is concrete, albeit, beautiful in its multi-layers. Definitely worthy of "honorable apparitions". Well written perception! Nicely done.