Being Alone In a World Full of People (Version 2)

How can we still be Quarantined  Spiritually and Socially With some many people on the planet As time runs rapid Our personal history as individuals Will become evident While the plight for our lives Remains a present open book That is unfolding day in and day out More and more people Are becoming superficial beings for popularity reasons Throughout the course of our present time In this reality game called life

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Reviews

[kublakhan27]

As always, your work is thought-provoking and very relevant to our generation...well done.

[Trigorin]

Cute little 'questioning' poem. You raise some valid points and it's interesting to see your take on them, but to be honest with you there just isn't that 'hook' that would make me want to keep reading if this was part of a larger piece. Perhaps think about writing in third-person and using more evocative imagery?