The Loving Mystery Man (A Secret Admirers Perspective)

He loves playing the background

Like a secret admirer

Intrigued by her profound beauty

She's as lovely as a Japanese lotus blossom in bloom

He's set his sights on her

Moving mysteriously within the shadows of daylight

Coming across anonymously

While delivering and bearing gifts

In a considerate and discreet fashion

Leaving his admirer wondering

How did he make this happen

In a such secretive and timely fashion

The Loving Mystery Man's objective is to find a perfect companion

Before the end of time truly happens within reality's real time hour glass for eternity

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Beautiful poem!! :) I loved it!!

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

I agree with Lina Grey on the fact that it is not really a sonnet, as sonnet's are supposed to have 10 syllables per line. Despite that fact, this is a really lovely poem :) I love the message here

[Holly Mason]

reality's real time hour glass for eternity-so many thoughts in just one line
a secret admirer looking for the perfect companion...very nice topic to write about truly
thank you for sharing

[Lina Grey]

uhm, not a sonnet really, but nice :)