The Loving Mystery Man (A Secret Admirers Perspective) - Reprised

He loves being incognito

Like a secret admirer with bravado

Intrigued by her profound beauty on the go

He gazes at her stilettos

She's as lovely as a Japanese lotus blossom in bloom

Mysteriously he assumes

That one day out of the blue

She'll finally have a clue

As to when and who

Her secret admirer will be as his sweet gestures

Will finally be in plain view

Exposing his true virtues

For trying to daringly pursue

The depth's of her soul and womanly figure

 

 

Author's Note

A loving poem I wanted to put together. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem about secretly admiring someone. All the hopeful wishes and wants

[Krista Weiss]

Lovely poem!! :)

[Maya]

I love this, i like that the rhyming was subtle and didnt take away from the poem itself. it makes me want a secret admirer! :p

[kublakhan27]

Love the first two lines...it sets the tone perfectly for the form that follows...great rhyming, great piece all around.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i like the rhyming, but the last one was much better, I think. Still awesome, but the last was just...i dunno, much nicer to me. Great write, though :D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is an enchanting sonnet!...Nicely done!
The secret admirer has a wonderful way with words.
Truly romantic! :)

[Holly Mason]

last lines seem to flow better this one has a little more mystery
just a really good topic to write about that keeps running through my mind*)
thank you for sharing

[Corset]

It's very mysterious, and intriguing.

[Scarlet Alice]

ooohhh....that was deep. really deep and sweet at the same time.

I'm not a fan of poems with deep words but it is really well written... really good. :)

[Rogue]

May he live on and love her forever. :) -whimsical-

This was an interesting write. You've captured a complete story in a very short piece.
Both charming and hopeful.