Befriending Thin Air (Revised)

No connection

With anyone near

My radius

Navigating off the social radar

Conspicuous by far

An interesting experience

Remaining miniscule

In appearance

As one part of a whole

Outlined puzzle frame

I'm seen as a piece

To a formidable picture

Without a belonging force

Pulling me in

For social interaction

Yet only nullification's air current

Is my relevant companion

As I'm a traveler

Amongst lookers and bystanders

Who have no care

Of being concerned

With a premonition

Disguised in the flesh

As a friend of

Nihility's

Blowing contrary wind's

Of speculation and suspicion

Adorned by the chatter of doubters

Who don't even know that

The real me

Has already passed by them

While flowing within the breeze's of eternity

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

No one is as set apart from society or their surroundings as they think they are.
This is an interesting piece, delving into a loner's psyche to a degree. When we're truly comfortable in who we are, we don't care what others think. This poem attempts that air to it, but it says to me that one screams to feel included, part of something more than oneself. A few grammatical errors, but the message is still well received.

[Rogue]

I love the change. You've turned this into truly a great piece. :)
Your talent is growing with each new work you add. I am truly in awe of how fast you are progressing.

Don't ever stop writing!