One Source - One Soul

The governing force

Perpetuating personal power

Remains active as

A channeling sixth sense for

Moral vindication

After being initiated and involved

In a obstacle course

For earning the right

To exist as a person

On this earth

Pertains to

A lack of remorse

Not visibly mistaken

From within the depths of anyone

Who's drawn wisdom water

From their own well of experiences

Along the highways and intersections

Of life's profound uncertainties

Yet choosing to exist

As a deity amongst the living

Remains the true initial number

One Source for

Establishing and foreshadowing

A profound and prophetic

Number One Soul

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

this was one hell of a poem! great job :D i love your diction here; it really helps to carry the message

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Thought provoking indeed. I like a write that explores the things we tend to sweep under the rug or just avoid thinking about. Nicely done.

[Rogue]

I am of four minds on this one. First, let me say not about the write or your structure.
No, my thoughts are occupied with the ending.

My busy imagination conjures up four possibilities..
1. Is humanity striving to become one? One collective conscious unto itself?
2. Is it perhaps the thought that one is better than another and all should now to them?
3. Is by chance God, or the Devil walking and living among us casting about light/darkness where they see fit?
4. Alien entities feeling out of place

-contemplating-

Very provocative piece thought wise. :)

[kublakhan27]

Another substantial addition to your soundtrack of The Human...that's how I think of your writing haha Well done :)

[Holly Mason]

drawn wisdom water-that is truly great imagery
our own well of experiences-this is very deep
One source for a number one soul-like this good way to tie title in and establish your writing point
thank you for sharing