Do You Believe In F.A.T.E.

Furthering A Tantalized Experience

Undoubtedly

Brought a candid being

To his knees

After who had surfaced

Above ground within reality

F.A.T.E.'s cousin

Named Karma

Started saying

Why in the world

Would a travesty

Challenge this ingenuous being's

Belief system

Into thinking that F.A.T.E.

Will never have

Its way with him

For being conceited about

Its so-called nonexistence

Among all human beings a like

Within the realm of reciprocate

Factors that dictate ties

Between burdened truths and lies

The free-spoken being finally realized

That lightening had suddenly

Struck him not once but three times

Since it had been the only thing

On his mind for such a long time

F.A.T.E. then decided

Enough was enough

Time to give him what he truly wants

So he can eventually become

A living example to all

Nonbeliever's who've never valued

The spoken testimony of the near death principle.

Reviews

[Aramey]

I've had a near death experience and literally am only here now because of a miracle. It truly does make you see life differently. I loved this write, and all of the power contained within the words.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i cant really find any words right now to describe this poem...its just awesome :D

[Emerald Seas]

The problem with people is that they have to experience something in order to appreciate its value or existence. Telling of one's experience rarely grabs people into the truth of the story to believe for themselves. A few may listen and take it to heart.
A very good story woven within these lines!

[Rogue]

Heh. You don't say? And here I always thought FATE stood for my Frivolous Attempts To Escape.. destiny, of course. -grin-

This one is fascinating. I love that you told a complete story within it.

[Holly Mason]

fates cousin Karma like that much
non believers who have never valued -love those two last lines
thank you for sharing

[Basu Gupta]

F-Fantastic
A-Adorable
T-tactful
E-Eccentric..
i think that's enough to describe this amazing piece..