The Elements of Life - Italicized

The Elements of Life

Keep me in stride

To embrace a beginning

Now revived

On the inside

Of my Spiritual Furnace

Fueling a Burning Desire

That's consciously forever linked

To random conversations amongst

Strangers daily

Along with treasured Camaraderie

Amongst colleagues alike

Where Hearsay plays

A vocal part to ignite

The course of action for

Weather predictions

Money Transactions

The use of Oxygen

Gives me more of a reason

For why

The Elements of Life

Remain a substantial link

Towards bringing me

Closer to the brink of Veracity

Where being Socialistic is

The only valued formality

Within the sacred scripts and doctrines

Of the Elements of Life

Reviews

[Basu Gupta]

I'm just really thankful that I got a chance to read this...the whole background,content and message seemed unique and impressive..

[kublakhan27]

As with life itself, there is much to digest in this feast of imagery and sentiment, but you have a knack for laying it all out with seamless precision...well-said, and well-written :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

love the diction here; its used well to further your point. Plus, this is a lovely poem and I love the message here :D Great job, my friend!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

What I like most about this piece is the way that is "sounds" when I read it. I love the flow and the style. This is certainly something that could be done "spoken word", and I think the power would be even greater. Nicely written.

[KeelyJane]

This was great! I love the word play and the flow was unique and fitting. I also like the substance behind the poem. The elements of life would seem to be the making of beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing. :)