The Need For Ellipsis's

What the …

I'm stuck

Trying to fill in this blank

I love Ellipsis's

I have them to thank

Myself for this intended message

Countless blessings

Come across

This poetic journey

I'm embarking on

For the sake of the part

I'm playing beyond expectations

Ellipsis's bridge the gap

Adhering to the true facts at hand

Leaving it up to reader

To comprehend

The theme behind

This solipsistic title

Know … Self

No one else

Will never know

How you've interpreted

The beginning, middle and ending

For the last ellipsis-ed sentence's side show

As “Your” distinguished

Self professed truth

Fills in the second

Three dotted blank

In disguise within the plain view

Of realities ... patrons

The last ellipsis is up to you

I chose “Hypocritical”

Now add your last two cents

Towards this ellipsis-ed social phrase

I can't wait to read the ending

Of your advised proposal

To this very day

Reviews

[Aramey]

A great write and my favorite part is the beginning, it got my attention in a hurry. Thanks for sharing :)

[KeelyJane]

Well written and very clever. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

lol this was quite funny and very well written! I loved this a ton :D

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I too am a lover of the elipsis...I tend to overuse it in written conversation :) I love the way that you used an inanimate thing and turned it into a metaphor for something deeper and more relevant. This had a very nice flow, and a spoken word feel. You should read your work aloud (maybe you do) at poetry readings, I think you would be well recieved.