Tipping The Scales Of Love's Influence

Love had such a grip

On cherished my thoughts

Of bliss

Like watching a sunrise

While witnessing a sunset

With Ms. I'll never forget

Along the sandy shores

Of mating beach

Her reach and caress

Left a lasting effect

Of infatuation on me

Like nothing else

I've ever experienced lately

I advised myself wisely that

She wasn't like

Every other woman

I've come in contact with since

The sanctity of her beauty truly

Tipped The Scales Of Love's Influence on me too

As the adherence to her curvaceous figure

Dictated the final resulting balance

For emotional loving power between

The left sided scale of courtship

That lost it's sponsorship to

The right sided scale of commitment

Which forever had its hold on

My hearts contingency

Towards holy matrimony

While establishing an endearing

Mating relational beginning

With a proposed bride to be

Now by my side

For all eyes to see

Before God and All of Humanity

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Ms. I'll never forget...she gets around doesn't she? I think we've all crossed paths with one of her clan at some point in our lives...you sing her praises with incredible soulfulness here...

[Aramey]

Isn't it funny when we find someone special, we want to scream it to the world? That's what this poem made me think of. I enjoyed this piece, thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This was like stepping into a room filled with words and emotion. The texture was tangible, real, something I could almost taste or touch. I love the line "Tipped The Scales of Love's Influence..."--those words work so well together, especially in this piece. I also loved the last line; and this is important, because last lines can make or break a poem. You nailed this one, and I entirely enjoyed ever bit of the read. Well done, and keep them coming!

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

This was very beautiful and well written. Your choice of words worked very very well here and its just...wow, its awesome.

I think I like it more when you write about love and whatnot because it's clear thats whats in your soul :D Keep on going, my friend!

[Basu Gupta]

nicely written friend...you really created an atmosphere required to read such a type of work..wonderful piece..write more

[KeelyJane]

Beautifully written my friend. It also has profound meaning which makes it that much more beautiful. Thank you for sharing. And thank you also for taking time to read my work. I shall try and return the favor as often as I can :)