Admiring Her From A Far

I was in awe

Of her beautiful skin

As the soft texture of it

Radiated an accompanied

Vibrant hairstyle

Along with a gorgeous smile

I had to stare inconspicuously

Every time

I glanced at her

Breathtaking figure

Every second remained worthwhile

As I was seeing

The apple of my eye

For the time being

It may have seemed like

I only dreamt about

Witnessing and embracing

The glare within those eyes

Of mesmerizing beauty

She became my contagious

New valentine

As I became a heartfelt

Admirer From A Far

Forever noticing

My vivacious queen to be

As time marched on

I hoped to make

An initial first impression upon

My one and only

Adorned female work of living art

Reviews

[constancelovesdarkness]

beautifully written poem:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with spiritwind...

the poem is so visual and we feel we are watching her with you...but what is on the inside of this package?

is she all show..or is her heart as beautiful as what is outside?

nice write...the admiration rings loudly...

[spiritwind]

I enjoyed this romp through the thoughts of an admirer from afar! Not trying to be anti-Romantic here, but I would keep this admiration to the "afar" distance until you've checked out if Beauty has a heart...
I am going to favorite this--there is something fresh and enthusiastic that you've caught so well in these verses!

[Seshat Nidaba]

Was she french or Belgian? I'm fond of infatuation poetry...you are 2/2

[Holly Mason]

very deep beauty comes with your words
this is lovely you have expressed your feelings well
Admirer from a far-don't let it get to far sounds like she is a catch and many sport gloves*)
the words you have used to describe your admiration are shining with truth
I love these kind of writes
thank you so for sharing*)

[Basu Gupta]

someone's damn lucky..for having such a silent lover like you....great work..

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

this is quite lovely :) great job!

[Rogue]

-sigh-

I am a sucker for romance. How very lucky she is that you write such a beautiful piece about her.
Thank you for sharing this one. :)