How Would You Live If You Never Existed (Original)

An intriguing question

To date

It's interesting to go into detail

Without hesitation

To demonstrate

The illustration of a lifestyle

Seen as an embodiment

Of a versatile symbolized forum

An inanimate object

Influencing all Grey Matter

Relating to a populace that truly matters

Humanity is being served

To deviate social interactions

Between many people

As gravity

Maintains proximity for

Promoting communication and procreation

For a productive and positive cycle of evolution

So the real fortifying question is

Would you want to live and exist

Like the proposed elements or a inanimate object

Described most recent to demonstrate

How Would You Live If You Never Existed

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

loved, loved, LOVED THIS POEM!!!! It's so amazing to me still that one person has this much poetic ability. I may even go as far as to compare your poetry to that of the great bard himself, though with modern twists and a different style. well done :D

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Wow, wow, wow...the last four lines of this one! You are great at tying up a piece. "As gravity maintains proximity for promoting communication and procreation"--this makes me want to laugh and cry at the same time. Loved it.

[Emerald Seas]

I enjoy the philosophical view in this piece that can be taken a few different ways. The ending (and title) gives me a feeling of looking for a second chance, recreating ourselves to be someone different than the past. Perhaps cutting off all old ties to begin anew. Or perhaps a reincarnation aspect for some readers... For me it reads of a time of reflection and starting fresh.
I enjoy these more in depth writings, closer to an individual emotion or influence. Very nice penning, B.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Intriguing question... I believe we are all here for a reason and that is what truly matters... maybe to be here for another soul, to save someone... Our human nature is to love...in some form...

So, to "exist", you must LIVE... ~xo~