Written Spiritual Journey

Each step

Get us closer

The florescent halo

Above our head and shoulders

Resonates what's meant to be

Good as golden

After reaching the pearly gates of heaven

Wearing a number seven uniform

By far the allure of purification

For being chosen

To represent heaven's army

Is only one phase of many steps

Designating our earthly mission

As human beings awaiting confirmation

For a sought after ascension ticket

Documented as the main redeeming aspect

Within all the pages and texts

On display within the gallery

Of our Written Spiritual Journey

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your write is outstanding with clear lines drawn that represent our soul's quest for entry into Heaven! I have heard all the requirements, and you have duly presented a case for the reasons why one should forge on, ever higher in a pursuit of purification!
Excellent!!

[Dhaye]

We are the ones who are making our souls' destiny.

Nice job. Keep it up. :)

[Shivam Murari]

To represent heaven's army.

You just got me with this line! This is an amazing poem! Write on! :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I have never thought of "ascension" in quite this way before. I like the imagery of people walking through those beautiful gates in uniforms with numbers and tickets for the ride to nirvana. Perhaps it is all a journey...maybe the journey doesn't stop when we get to where we are going, but we are simply shuffled forward on to another phase of existence. This one made me ponder a bit, and I quite liked that.

Favorite lines:
Wearing a number seven uniform
By far the allure of purification
For being chosen
To represent heaven's army

You always have an amazing hand when it comes to cleverly playing with wording and metaphor. I also like the flow and beat of this one; it was easy to get into the read and stick with it. Well done.

[allura]

i really enjoy this spiritual piece.

[Rogue]

This ranks as one of your best to me. Your words really flow which only adds to the spirituality you are conveying in the piece.
Just a wonderful piece of work! :)

[Kristin Lee]

I like the spirituality portrayed in this one. The theme you've chosen and the wording have been woven beautifully together. Great job.