Embracing Another Sunrise

Another sunrise is

Reassuring in a sense

For demonstrating that

The sun's rays of gifted light

Will shine upon everyone

Who welcomes every

New day with a smile

To feel whole again

As the worthwhile person

They want to become

Originating from

Within the core

Of their spirited soul

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Good use of imagery, and an admirable topic. Nothing too special, let's be honest, but pleasant to read. You're missing an 'n' in the first line.
Good work.

[jdking]

Ill drink to that