Embracing Another Sunset

Another sunset is

Reassuring in a sense

For demonstrating that

The sun's rays of gifted light

Have already shined

On everyone

Who've chosen

To welcome and recognize

Every new day with a smile

To feel whole again

As the worthwhile person

They want to become

Originating from

Within the essence

Of their zestful soul

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

This line really stood out to me: "As the worthwhile person They want to become" not just the person they want to become, but the worthwhile person. That truly does make all the different. Very well stated.

[Rogue]

Hmmmm..
My take on this was very different from the life and death metaphor.

We get out of each day what we put into it. Sometimes the results are not instant and take some time. But, what we reflect outward to others is generally (not always, there are the exceptions) is what is generally reflected back.

Very positive philosophy in this one. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I really enjoyed this one, as it seemed a little like a "rebirth" of sorts. I love the sunset as a metaphor for death as well as a new beginning. All things are a cycle, and perhaps in the "sunset" of our own lives we will find that we need only endure a night before a different dawn arrives...interesting thought.

Technical note:
Second to last line "Within the inside" sounds a little off to me, I would go with something like "within the core" or "within the essence" something like that. Just my thoughts.

Overall, very well done!