Hostility's Volcano

Erupting hot lava

From unsettled scores of revenge

At wits end

Is the molten rock

From the bottom up

Corrupt enough to surface

Amongst friends and enemies alike

Who are never at ease

After lava has sizzled

Everyone involved in defying

The intensity of Hostility's Volcano

Separating the body

From every watching eye imaginable

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

This one sizzles with unstated currents of something beyond hostility. I like the metaphor comparing the boiling point of anger or rage to a volcano. How it affects everyone around us.

[Traci]

Very nicely done, good imagery.

Everyone involved in defying
The intensity of Hostility's Volcano
Separating the body
From every watching eye imaginable

Very powerful lines. I look forward to reading more of your work :)

[chaotic katie]

nice imagery good flow great message. i love how your work rings with truth put into creative words.