Witty Theme (Haiku)

Forget the past now

The future will be brighter

Advocate the truth

Reviews

[Scarlet Alice]

it is indeed a haiku. ^^ I love it.

[Dana Alsamsam]

I bet i'm reading into this way too far...but the last line feels completely removed from the other two. this makes me think that the first two lines are stating a common thing that people say- the future will be brighter, stay positive etc- and the last line is sort of to say- no that's bullshit, or "advocate the truth" that may be totally off your mark, but this short little work did make me think!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Forget the past...easier said than done, though an apt thing to strive for. I do agree with advocating truth, however, because I think that honesty is the only true form of emotional connection that any two people can have. This is quite unique.

[Trigorin]

Not bad. The last line feels a little off to me, but you've stuck very well to the traditional format (if you leave out the whole focus on seasons, etc.) Good work.

[chaotic katie]

a lovely haiku, nicely written!

[PP]

Truth but only truth! Nice one :)

[Rogue]

What is there ever really but the truth in the end?

[Dhaye]

Oh, yes! I agree with this.
Nice Senryu, my dear.

[JenniferMarie]

Exactly. Advocate the truth

[Kristin Lee]

Ah, very powerful. The truth will set you free.