Witty Theme (Relationship Haiku)

Eat and be merry

With the one you love the most

A joyous union

Reviews

[constancelovesdarkness]

awwweeeee.. short and cute.. :)

[Kristin Lee]

Haikus are catching on, I like this one. Its sweet, simple and has multiple meanings.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) I like this one a lot - could mean more than what is stated, and all possible meanings make me smile!

[Shivam Murari]

Nice. Meaning comes across plainly and clearly. Though, Haiku is about nature. I think it should have been a Senryu

[Leandro Mendez]

i like your haikus :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

your haikus are always sweet and thoughtful! have you ever thought of writing six word stories? i think they're something you'd really enjoy, right up your alley. great job!

[NA]

Lovely little read :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

More of a Senryu, but beautifully done. I love the idea of meshing food and love, because I think that when those two things come together magic happens. Food is intrinsically sensual, and to share that with someone else just increases the enjoyment. Well done.

One suggestion:

Eat and be merry
With the one you love the most: (adding the punctuation just gives the reader time to pause & indulge)
A joyous union

[Rogue]

-smile-

You hit a special chord in me with this one.

Perfect. :)

[chaotic katie]

nicely written I enjoyed reading