Cleverly Written Montage

Sequences of written stanzas

Have unfolded

Like a pop up book's

Storyline line

Molded into a clay designed

Figurine within its entirety

Before being housed & displayed

Within a poetic gallery's

Hall of Cleverly Written Montage

So all admirers can see

A relative embroidery

Of a scripted & sculptured masterpiece

In the making

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Haha I love the title, it's witty but not too witty, and sets the mood nicely...I know you've been trying out some different styles lately and I'd say you've been pretty successful more often than not, and have displayed a lot of diversity in the process...I like the idea of a relative embroidery, it's a great assessment of poetry and a poet's plight...well done :)

[Kristin Lee]

Our lives are like a cleverly written montage aren't they? And pictures the halls where we gather to see them in the making. I like this piece. Very thought provoking in its simple yet beautiful nature.

[Rita L. Sev]

So all admirers can see
A relative embroidery
Of a scripted & sculptured masterpiece...

Brilliant! Outsiders see this perfectly crafted poem, and have no idea the painstaking work that went into it... Great write!

[Leandro Mendez]

cleverly written.. i really liked the piece.

Beautiful sculptured richness in words here my friend, good to be back and read you!!!

- Elisa