Caged Silence

We've yet to Hear

Loud and clear

Within the presence

Of a realization

Called Caged Silence

Without the fear or regret

Of losing our alliance

With the other four senses

Which make up

An embodiment like

Sight since seeing the cage

Relates to a dreadful Smell

Of the unheard of

Amplifying a feel for this rare cage

Is described as a Touch

Needed to Taste the coldest in the air

Beyond the omnipresent stare

Of an uncomprehending Caged Silence

Author's Note

All reviews welcome. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[s y e]

This speaks truth! I loved it, it really sends out a powerful message! :) Well done.

~ Noodle.

[Kristin Lee]

But is silence really uncomprehending? Or is it simply processing the sight, smell, touch and taste of the cage?

I like the internal reflections this one prompts. Great job.

[chaotic katie]

Very true! Nicely penned!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the little walk through the senses that you have taken us through with this piece. I always find it amazing how accute certain senses can become when others are clouded...have you ever sat in a dark room and closed your eyes and just listened? Eventually, the sounds start to have texture. Nicely done, my friend.

[quinfinn]

there are those in this world who remain silent and those who speak too loudly...a happy medium is rare...diplomacy is a patent of democracy...the Greeks had great wisdom. would that we could all adhere to the better natures within us, alas, it is not always so. yet, we try.....excellent write.

[SyberRose]

Actions speak louder then words...yes and another well penned write from you Bpoet...enjoyed:)

[Rita L. Sev]

What is not said speaks so loudly, and holds us back at times. I like that you brought in all the senses; such silence is not only perceived through the ears...