Concrete Personal Solidification

Laying the bricks

Separated by characteristics

Of a Concrete Personal Solidification

The aptitude for this desire

In order to possess

A higher sense of self

Being undisclosed

As a reinvented diagnostic character

Were not accustomed to seeing

Believing is truly critical

If you want your life

To be revered

In the form of a mural

At the end of life's journey now

By reopening our destined hierarchy's

Anointed tunnel

So Glorifying & Dictating

A lasting legacy for every single person's

Concrete Personal Solidification

Will become evident for sure

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

I like how your poems always have a message. They are well written but are lost in over strung flowery words. Great job.

[Frieda P]

Handing down a legacy of strength and moral and ethical distinction is what we all hope to be able to leave when we're mere spirits in the wind...this one has a grace all it's own Bpoet....

[SyberRose]

We should set a good example for our children and thats how they learn to build a foundation
of love and family for their children...that is my interpretation of your poem BP...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Interesting images here. Our lives are laying the foundation to somehow reach permanence - this is what your poem brings to my mind.

[quinfinn]

i sense a message here, but i am loathe to explore the implications. excellent write.

[chaotic katie]

I like this piece! Nicely written!