An Inadvertent Outcome Caused By Another

There's a purpose

As to why

We have to go through

Peaks and valleys in life

Even if the cause of it

Came from a hidden force

In the form of another person's

Divine intervention

Their pleasure may lead to our pain

Yet if it's a gain

Towards the greater good

For our own sake

Why take

A deviated risk from becoming

A stronger person

No more or less

Subsequently weakening a link

Within a chain of the morality process

In terms of maintaining & strengthening our brains

So we'll never have to refrain

From what life truly

Has in-store for all or us

As a whole

After we've found every clue

Pertaining to

A lasting earthly treasure & fortune

Once and before

Our days as individuals

Are officially done

Author's Note

I'm still riding my experimental wave regarding different poetic themes. All reviews are welcome. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Leandro Mendez]

Thought provoking piece, well written!

[Zahra]

Thought provoking,really nice. Beautifully penned

[Kristin Lee]

There is a purpose...the challenge is figuring it out and learning from it before, as you say, our days as individuals are officially done.

[David Scott]

I like the exploration of thought here. I may not agree with all of the philosophical points made, but that matters little. What I do agree with is we should ask questions and search with an honest open mind and heart as you have done here.
Well done.

[Rita L. Sev]

Flows better, and your meaning is still intact. Great revisions!

[Dana Alsamsam]

i love this theme, that everything happens for some reason or another, good or bad. you live through them to increase your strength, mental and physical. you also added in the interesting thought of others impact on your own individual destiny. are we all indirectly impacting some one elses life? who knows- very thought provoking.

there were a few places where you could clean up the flow of language a bit to make it an easier read. watch the amount of times you say "you" or "your"

overall great write!

[s y e]

The little things that happen in life is what makes us stronger. "What Doesn't Kill You Makes You Stronger" ~ Kelly Clarkson.

Amazing.

~ Noodle.

[Rita L. Sev]

Everything that happens will have an impact, for good or bad, on our lives. We can choose if it makes us better in the long run.

*careful with their/there/they're. In your opening line, you want "there's"

[quinfinn]

what doesn't kill us makes us stronger, well, certainly meaner....nicely done.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

There is always a reason...things happen and we adapt to them, this in turn shapes us as human beings. I think that we are the summation of all of our experiences, good or bad. I like the concept of this one. A few areas where the flow got lost a little, particularly in the three extra long lines. Overall, though, nicely done.

First line "There's a purpose" (there not their)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Looks good :)