Everything Will Eventually Come To A Head

Underneath the surface

Of our thoughts

Lies a dormant

Underlying notion of sorts

Like a shadow

Trying to hide

From daylight's plain view

Its a inescapable concept

Like a deep seeded rooted truth

Within our hearts

We all must dread

Yet nothing in life is hidden forever

Because Everything Will Eventually Come To A Head

Reviews

[s y e]

This is such a true write, I love how there is so much truth in it. I completely agree with what you've said. It carries a lot of meaning, and the message portrayed was excellent.

~ Noodle.

[Cursed]

A touching view. Bpoet you write with such heart.

[Skye]

I agree completely. Hopefully soon my life will come to a head.

[Kristin Lee]

Oh how very true this is. I like how concise and to the point this piece is and yet it holds quite a punch.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yet nothing in life is hidden forever...

Such truth here; and the sooner we face truth, the better. Well done.

[quinfinn]

one way or another, your deeper self finds a way to emerge and reveal itself....nicely penned.

[SyberRose]

Yes secrets have a way of haunting you...Enjoyed this BP...:)

[Pryde Foltz]

I love the way you've penned this. There seems a mystery within a mystery. Here's to the grand reveal.

[K. Louis]

You can't save your face and your a*s at the same time! Lol...yes, the truth will always surface!This was focused.. I like the shadow similie best. :)

[Aramey]

I love this, it's incredibly honest and carries a lot of meaning without over wording or over describing, which gives it a lot of power. Bravo, on a great write :)