Look At What's Taking Shape

Look At What's Taking Shape

Unveiling a landscape

Of dignified promise

Compromising with the atmosphere

I've befriended solace

In the best possible way

A motion's been cleared

For a takeoff

That's never been reconcilable

Yet by appeased thoughts

Willfully put in place

The cards are now stacked in my favor

Look At What's Taking Shape

Author's Note

Venturing into a new type of written theme. All reviews welcome. Enjoy and thanks for stopping by. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

so inspirational! I always enjoy reading your work

[kublakhan27]

I had the image of a house of cards in my head as I read this...nicely done :)

[s y e]

This is clever, Bpoet - I enjoyed it, well done. There are so many stunning lines that it would be mean to pick one out of the crowd, haha.

~ Noodle.

[Kristin Lee]

"The cards are now stacked in my favor" - I love this line, as if to say we can carve our own fate...because we can. Great job.

[quinfinn]

a clever and engaging write, full of promise and spark. well done.

[Pryde Foltz]

A little sympathetic magic.

[Rita L. Sev]

I've befriended solace
In the best possible way...

This is indeed wise, and a step toward stacking the cards in out favor...

[SyberRose]

Always great when cards are stacked in your favor ha...nicely done BP...:)

[KeelyJane]

I like the theme. I think you definitely could expand the substance here though. Keep on keeping on. Always a pleasure friend :)

[Zahra]

Interesting, a unique theme, well penned.