We're All Freethinking Spirits At Heart

We're free to live

Free to think

Free to forgive

Free to remain positive

Even when being conditioned

Into a lackluster existence

Conformity is malevolent

Yet in the end

We're only left with

A 24 hour halo concession stand

Selling & Benefiting

Every limited access

Heavenly Gateway pass

Designed to decode & assess

A combination defining

A final score for our life's journey

Before entering

The pearly gates by far

We've had a fairly clean slate

From the very start

By being blessed to be human since

We're All Freethinking Spirits At Heart

Reviews

[Leandro Mendez]

yes we are.. and conforming is malevolent, great piece, thought provoking

[s y e]

I'm so glad no one can read our thoughts, haha. I mean for some people that would be invading their privacy and they're right! Us poets express our feelings anyway, in such a beautiful way - like you have here, well done.

~ Noodle

[Kristin Lee]

"Conformity is malevolent" this line is brilliant! What a great message to this piece.

[Dana Alsamsam]

this outlook on the world and life in general is so positive and refreshing! i think you could play with the wording in the second to last line. overall very good and insightful work here- reminds me to be thankful of my free will and ability to think independently.

[Rita L. Sev]

WE are indeed blessed to be human, with the gift of free thought. We make the choices that can enrich our lives... Nicely penned, BP.

[quinfinn]

thank goodness no one has come up with a way to read and regulate our thoughts....yet. since this train of thought could have gone either way, i like the positive energy you emphasized herein. this is a clever and enlightening read.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most poised and relatable piece that soothes the reader.

[SyberRose]

Yes and poets express themselves so beautifully like you just did BP...Rose:)