A Walking Eternal Flame

No evil wind

Could ever extinguish

This coveted

Sanctity flame

Forever burning

Like a effervescent scent

Of a sweet smelling incense

Like frankincense

During advent

Which left behind a lasting imprint

Of holiness

In the midst of a consecrated clergy

Exclusively no one could ever refrain

From hearing God's

Sacred anointing claim

After they've become this spiritual embodiment

Called A Walking Eternal Flame

Author's Note

All reviews are welcome. I had been experimenting with this particular theme for a little bit. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Very nice work and nice message...well done :)

[s y e]

This is great, well done for writing such an amazing piece. Quite thought provoking, BP - thanks for sharing.

~ Noodle.

[Kristin Lee]

That which no one can extinguish. Very well expressed thought.

[Rita L. Sev]

This piece reminds me of Confirmation, the "Fire of the Spirit" we speak of. Well penned, BP!

[chaotic katie]

Nicely penned! I enjoyed reading!

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned BP...and thank you for posting...Rose:)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Every time that I read your writing (and some times more than others), the very first thing that comes to my mind is a man on a street corner reading his poetry as people pass and go about their daily lives. You need to get into reading this stuff, my friend...it would be so powerful out loud.

[quinfinn]

nicely composed and well worded...there is much wisdom in this piece. being pagan, i don't embrace the core value of this write, but i do appreciate the fact that you have writing skills. well penned.