It's Lovely To See My Flower In Bloom

A smiling face

The caress of soft hands

Leaves a lasting imprint

Of tenderness

Forever radiant like her beautiful skin

To the touch

Her looks resemble

A loving bride

Anticipating and enjoying the ride

Of lasting & loving commitment

After dancing as husband & wife

Her honorable & devoted groom

Always loved to comply

It's Lovely To See My Flower In Bloom

I never doubted why after the day

I first laid my loving & alluring eyes on you

That our union

Would remain special & beautiful

As rose petals in full bloom

Author's Note

Experimenting with a poetic sentimental type of theme. All reviews are welcome. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy.

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this was adorable and full of sweet romantic whimsy! great work and i enjoy your exploration of different themes

[Kristin Lee]

I really enjoyed this one. The husband and wife references in correlation with flowers coming to life. As if to say flowers and relationships both take nurturing. Very well done. Very touching.

[kublakhan27]

Very sweet and heartfelt...nicely done :)

[s y e]

This is quite romantic, BP - love the imagery and wording. Awesome job.

~ Noodle.

[Rita L. Sev]

Very sweet and romantic, with lovely images. :)

[SyberRose]

A lovely piece of love everlasting...nicely penned BP...Rose:)

[Dhaye]

Sweet. You're a romantic partner. Your wife is so blessed having you.

Nice concept and choice of words.

[Pryde Foltz]

Very romantic and your bride is lucky girl. Note: the last line do you mean petal...

[quinfinn]

a bride is a beautiful sight to behold. the idea of continuing that awe and reverence is simply wonderful. when we fall in love, we stay in love...bottom line....what does that say about marriages? phew!!! excellent write.

[Rogue]

This is probably your most romantic one to date. I really liked the title and the analogy of the flower. That was a lovely touch.

Wonderful piece. :)