Living Life & Loving The Thrill Of It (Version 2)

It's the best experience

Known to humanity

Living Life

Bears portentous fruit

During our youthful days

As adolescents we progress

More & More

As adults we grow

Along the worldly race track

Of pretentiousness

Bearing with all present facts & potential setbacks

Spur us into

Loving The Trill Of It

Yet how can we only have

One entire lifetime spin on our destinies

Regardless of gender

It's a rare hindrance

Where time is the only formality

Controlling the speed

Of our individualized experiences

So I guess as a witness

Of this permanent contingency

It's plain as day to see

Living Life & Loving The Thrill Of It

Within it's entirety

Is for everyone who's dares to attend

Their own commencement ceremony

For a chance

To spread true advocacy

Amongst their peers

Who deeply cherish to be

A part of an exciting camaraderie following

Author's Note

This was originally going to be the final and only version. But this was one of those poems where I had a few different endings I could use that I really liked. All review are welcome, Thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[MOON]

Well expressed Living Life & Loving The Thrill Of It, the reason to be.