The Tale Of A Restless Heart

Weariness has made

A restless heart

Feeling relentless

To absolve

The wrongs of all loved ones

Who've been involved

With hardships

Beyond their control

The blood of self sacrifice

Keeps this heart pumping

To help fulfill

A morally uplifting

Devoted family obligation

From the start

By contrast

It's a relative's redeeming art

That's showcasing

The Tale Of A Restless Heart

Author's Note

Experimenting again with deep and profound theme. All reviews are welcome. Thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

I enjoyed this one. The self sacrifice of a restless heart is definitely an art.

[BlackRose]

Very nice themed message here. Deep with such feeling from the heart.

[Dana Alsamsam]

in your profound themes i feel that your language has found a great clarity previously unexplored in your work. i like these ones the best of all of your writing so far! great work here- so great to see writers exploring new themes.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, a profound theme for sure. Well explored here, BP!

[Shivam Murari]

Compact and meaningful. Nicely carried. :)

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

Good stuff. I liked the theme.

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice message. I like.

[shallimarRose]

Oh I love this.. That would be a great name.. Restless Heart Poetry... :)
Enjoyed this very much.. shallimarRose

[chaotic katie]

A very deep and emotion piece! I enjoyed reading.