Seed Of Your Thoughts (You Reap What You Sow)

It's amazing what manifests

Once our thought processes

Spring into action

A reflection of your desires

Materializes without restriction

Like gravity

Owning up to its position

As the master of reality's

Human elements

Beware of negativity

Within your subconscious

It loves dictating the velocity

Of every intangible vision

Within the disclosed minds of everyone

Who should befriend

A positive perspective in life

Represented as a plight

Forgone with the plausible mental undertow

Of the Seed Of Your Thoughts (You Reap What You Sow)

Author's Note

I'm experimenting again with the second italicized poetic journey. Thanks for stopping by, all review are welcome and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

You are what you think. What a concept! Great write up :)

[Rogue]

This is a very well put together piece with a positive message.
We all have negative thoughts. This is only natural. It is important to keep a cap on them though. To balance or outweigh them if you can with positive. Especially if you are probe to depression. The negative can swallow you alive when it gets out of control.

Enjoyed both the thoughts and wording here. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is like a poem within a poem..

i like the positiveness of this...if we let our negative thoughts grow they will overcome us...

the mental undertow can drown us all too easily...we have to keep our thoughts going in a positive direction.

nicely done, Bpoet.

[SyberRose]

Its always nice to be around positive people...other wise negativity will drain the energy from you.:)
Nicely penned BP.

[Pryde Foltz]

I'm really liking the dual meanings.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Inspiring piece. Splendid read and write.

[Rita L. Sev]

I love the message here. I firmly believe that our thoughts and words become our reality... Great piece, BP!

[RainDancer1997]

Great experimenting then:) Its a great poem:)

[RainDancer1997]

Great experimenting then:) Its a great poem:)