Seed Of Your Thoughts (You Reap What You Sow) - One Word Revision - Version 2

It's amazing what manifests

Once our thought processes

Spring into action

A reflection of your desires

Materializes without restriction

Like gravity

Owning up to its position

As the master of reality's

Human elements

Beware of negativity

Within your subconsciousness

It loves dictating the velocity

Of every intangible vision

Within the disclosed minds of everyone

Who should befriend

A positive perspective in life

Represented as a plight

Forgone with the plausible mental undertow

Of the Seed Of Your Thoughts (You Reap What You Sow)

Author's Note

I made a one word revision from the original, can you tell which word it is. :) All reviews welcome, Thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

Strong message a always. You've truly got a knack for these.

[Leandro Mendez]

don't think I read the first version.. but great write and read :)