In Need Of Enlightenment (While Wandering In The Dark)

Getting off track

In life

Can become a downward spiral

Planting seeds of disparity

In a mind full of sorrow

Vanquishing hopes for a savored tomorrow

Within the chambers

Of a broken heart

That's dyingly lying  dormant

In Need Of Enlightenment (While Wandering In The Dark)

Author's Note

Just wanted to try a short, quick type of read that's powerful & profound at the same time, All reviews welcome, Thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

I love the analogy - in need of enlightenment is like wandering in the dark. We've all been there.

[Lydia Shutter]

After a broken heart, it is not easy to pick up the pieces and move forward. Staying in a dark place is a bit too simple, n'est pas? Moving onward and upward is what we have to force ourselves to do, but it is worth it in the long tun. Very well written. lydi**

[RainDancer1997]

Very true an powerful:) Sometimes we get so lost and down its hard to get back up and move forward

[Rita L. Sev]

Getting off track - sometimes it seems impossible to get back on... well penned.

I love this phrase: ... dyingly lying dormant...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i do so like this piece...the need for enlightenment to pick us up off the floor of life...we can be so filled with sorrow and despair...thinking things could never get better...but somehow we need that light to show us the way out of the darkness...

[Pryde Foltz]

Vanquishing hopes for savored tomorrow

Love this line. It really describes those moments that are the bleakest. Great write all together.