Unadvertently Separated From A Heavenly Main Gate (Italicized Version 2)

We're afflicted by decisions

Made on behalf of humanity

Sin

Had forged heaven's gateway

Under lock & key

Redemption of our souls

Is the only way

To enter eternity

Since our spiritual forecasts

As human beings have been

Unadvertently Separated From A Heavenly Main Gate

Author's Note

I'm enjoying the two poetic journey's within a poem. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the forecasts have us separated...i like that!

i like both these poems...did you mean "unadvertently" or "inadvertently"?

either way...these poems speak loudly and carry a big stick also...

nicely done.

[B-poet]

Thanks Jacob. I'll tell you what, I'll just post a special version of this poem with Inadvertently as the title. Thank you for inspiring me to do so. And when you have time you can check it out. Thanks again for your splendid review, and take care. :)