Inadvertently Separated From Heaven's Main Gate (Special Version)

We're afflicted by decisions

Made on behalf of humanity

Sin

Had forged heaven's gateway

Under lock & key

Redemption of our souls

Is the only way

To enter eternity

Since our heavenly forecasts

As human beings have been

Inadvertently Separated From Heaven's Main Gate

Author's Note

A special version deviated from the Unadvertently... Original & Italicized Versions. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

That was going to be my only suggestion :) In vs un.

[Leandro Mendez]

wow, great write to indulge in ourselves, cool write.

[s y e]

This is great, I loved this. Loved the message you portrayed! (:

~ Noodle.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah... disregard my earlier comment! :) I like this one; same great message of redemption - :)