Making It To The Grave In One (Peace) Piece

In the world today

There's clearly

Too much social opposition

Against who

We really are

As individualized people

Is it believable enough

For everyone to exist

As a rare peaceful breed

As such

Our souls are crying out

For contentment

Yet there's an ascension process

Already in place

Everyone will face

This fate

So returning back

To our true essence

Remains a formality at best

Establishing a test

We'll all have a chance

To pass in the end

Defined to cease

Our earthly existence

As a rarity

Considered to be

Making It To The Grave In One (Peace) Piece

Author's Note

Experimenting with the theme of a harmonious existence for everyone followed by death. All reviews welcome, Thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

"our souls are crying out for contentment" that line really stuck out to me. Not only for its truth but how well placed it is within the context. I also like the play on peace/piece. We should after all be spiritually whole in order to be truly whole. But most people are too absorbed in physical things to grasp that concept.

[SyberRose]

This is something i hate to think about...but im not going to the grave i'm taking a detour and being cremated...ha...nicely done as always BP...Rose

[s y e]

This is a great piece, BP - don't think anyone is ready to go to their grave yet, this is really well written with some really powerful lines, excellent as always.

~ Noodle.

[BlackRose]

GREEEAT piece. Not ready for the grave at anytime and who is, but wonderfully done.

[Rita L. Sev]

an ascension process
Already in place..

I certainly hope this is true, that we are already moving toward less opposition - though I wish it was not moving only in the direction of the grave...

[shallimarRose]

Excellent piece Brian... thanks for the rr.. Rose

[RainDancer1997]

Great experimenting:) Nice poem!